Disconnected Pedestrian

Should I entitle this "Disconnected Pedestrian" or "Isolated Pedestrian"? This is the page I just created to go at the beginning of my "The Solution" chapter. This page starts before all the precedents are shown. Does this connect the concept better so its not such a blunt start?

Updated Interior Sketch/Render at Bus Stop

Connectivity Diagram Revisited

Thoughts on the Connectivity Diagram? Should I break apart the nature and people connections? They could be 2 separate diagrams and I could also locate them side by side.

Track Images

Hey Susan;
Check out my google docs:
I spent a little time on these images tonight - I took Herb's advice and took photos of a real life working track, then did a photo montage on top of the photo to try to get the concept of the designed track above Wal Mart across. Can you take a look at this and tell me if you think I need to use both photos or just the one that I've manipulated? My text coincides with using both, but I can change that if needed. I just need to denote and add the floor plan and I'll be finished with design of this portion of the circuit. Any other thoughts on this spread?

Thanks.

Updated Photo Monologue & Title Pg

Check out my google docs to see my revised photo monologue:
arranged them topically - non-safety of pedestrians, sidewalk conditions, and obstructions/berms on sidewalks.

Also, please see the revised (less colorful) title page.